"Greenlit" archived

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Thanks to my finally getting my ass in gear and giving it a final edit, "Greenlit" is now up at Level Three (there, harriet_spy Sarah) and at the SSA.

The draft version is still up for those interested in process.

E-mail gives me hives, but feedback is welcome below. How much do I love LiveJournal's comment function?

Comments

whoo-hooo!

[(Anonymous)]

Great stuff! Where are the WiPs for me to stalk? I shall go after Jenn. Because I got to the end and then went back and said, what green glow? Is Lex being a Morally Ambiguous Boy again? egging you on, Mary Ellen Doctor greenish Science

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Is Lex being a Morally Ambiguous Boy again?

Always. ::pointy evil grin::

But yes, there's a Kryptonite collar round Clark's neck in the "present," and the glow-stick in the flashback.

[barely-bean.livejournal.com]

This story still gives me the creeps. I love it!

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::beams::

[rhiannonhero.livejournal.com]

Haven't read the story yet. But, again, I have to say, re: your icon, if they can take the chick out, how hard can it possibly be to put Lex in???

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It is a lot trickier, actually.

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But Lionel loves Lex too. In his own, *special* way...

comments on Greenlit

[fajrdrako.livejournal.com]

Hi Jack -

I wanted to say how much I loved your story "Greenlit" - it's beautitful, it's brilliant, it's clever, it's sexy, and it's very nicely crafted. I particularly liked the way you described Lex's head as gracile, so perfect in its implications - and the whole thing beautifully romantic. My favourite line is probably Clark "watching the muscles of Lex's back shift under the designer pullover that was Lex's idea of dressed down."

Thank you!

namaste,
Elizabeth

Re: comments on Greenlit

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Thank *you*! I enjoy approaching writing as a "craft" -- I've actually been known to compare my process to sculpting -- so I'm glad to see it's appreciated.