"Greenlit" archived

[buggery]

Thanks to my finally getting my ass in gear and giving it a final edit, "Greenlit" is now up at Level Three (there, harriet_spy Sarah) and at the SSA.

The draft version is still up for those interested in process.

E-mail gives me hives, but feedback is welcome below. How much do I love LiveJournal's comment function?

Comments

comments on Greenlit

[fajrdrako.livejournal.com]

Hi Jack -

I wanted to say how much I loved your story "Greenlit" - it's beautitful, it's brilliant, it's clever, it's sexy, and it's very nicely crafted. I particularly liked the way you described Lex's head as gracile, so perfect in its implications - and the whole thing beautifully romantic. My favourite line is probably Clark "watching the muscles of Lex's back shift under the designer pullover that was Lex's idea of dressed down."

Thank you!

namaste,
Elizabeth

Re: comments on Greenlit

[buggery.livejournal.com]

Thank *you*! I enjoy approaching writing as a "craft" -- I've actually been known to compare my process to sculpting -- so I'm glad to see it's appreciated.