But it will make Alfred (think he's made Dick) feel better.
Another round of applause on the parenthetical (not really) asides. They worked really well for me -- they translated into a low mutter at the back of my head, underlying what was around them. They start out so reflective, and then really underline Dick's shock in the Cave.
And. Oh gods. Alfred. Being all silently-understanding and -- ack. Definitely ack. ::whimpers::
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Date: 2005-08-19 05:25 pm (UTC)But it will make Alfred (think he's made Dick) feel better.
Another round of applause on the parenthetical (not really) asides. They worked really well for me -- they translated into a low mutter at the back of my head, underlying what was around them. They start out so reflective, and then really underline Dick's shock in the Cave.
And. Oh gods. Alfred. Being all silently-understanding and -- ack. Definitely ack. ::whimpers::