feedback from jack's harem

Date: 2002-07-14 12:32 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
i ended up liking it in spite of my initial reservations. while reading your introduction, i was all 'oh no. happy!lex. sappy!lex. this does not compute.' but you make a very good case for this kind of lex.

i really liked
watching his eyes dance with joy
and
He can love me without that love being crimped in the vises of his lies and mine.

/insert heaving-bosom sigh here/

hugs from the harem
mosself


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