1) What was the first story you read that I wrote? And the Sailor, Home From the Sea
1a) Did you like it or not? Yes. Very much so.
1b) Why or why not? The idea was novel and executed extremely well. Also it was a first person POV that I could enjoy - I typically avoid that particular POV.
1c) What do you remember most about it? The fact that Lex couldn't look at Clark during sex.
2) What story of mine do you like the best? And the Sailor, Home From the Sea and Apricot
2a) Why? And the Sailor for all the reasons listed above. Apricot because it's beautiful and sensual.
2b) What separates it from the other stuff I wrote? Hm. POV for And the Sailor - truly a good 1st person excites me muchly. Apricot - I'm not sure there's anything that seperates it so much as it exemplifies what I enjoy about your writing.
2c) What separates it from other stories like it? The imagery, I think.
3) What story of mine do you like the *least*? The Utterly Perfect Murder
3a) Why? Not exactly sure. I like the Lex portrayal but the story overall just didn't capture me.
3b) What separates it from the other stuff I wrote? Maybe it's less visual. Less about the senses altogether.
3c) What separates it from other stories like it, if anything? *shrug* Dunno really.
4) What about my writing style grabs you? The imagery, the description. It's all very sensual.
4a) What stories exemplify this style? And the Sailor, Apricot, the 2040 WIP (*pokes Jack* work on that last one would you *flutters eyelashes prettily* please?)
5) What type of story (not which characters) would you like to see me write? Hm. Maybe longer stories. Or, hey, even more stories would be brilliant *g*
6) Is there a specific character or situation you'd like to see me try my hand at? Some of the more minor characters. Pete. Maybe Chloe. And more Superman era Lex.
6a) Why do you think I'd be good at it? Because you often have novel ideas and I'd like to see your thoughts on other characters.
7) Is there anything, in your experience, that you think would help me fix a specific flaw in my writing? Nothing leaps to mind.
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Date: 2002-10-22 03:45 pm (UTC)And the Sailor, Home From the Sea
1a) Did you like it or not?
Yes. Very much so.
1b) Why or why not?
The idea was novel and executed extremely well. Also it was a first person POV that I could enjoy - I typically avoid that particular POV.
1c) What do you remember most about it?
The fact that Lex couldn't look at Clark during sex.
2) What story of mine do you like the best?
And the Sailor, Home From the Sea and Apricot
2a) Why?
And the Sailor for all the reasons listed above. Apricot because it's beautiful and sensual.
2b) What separates it from the other stuff I wrote?
Hm. POV for And the Sailor - truly a good 1st person excites me muchly. Apricot - I'm not sure there's anything that seperates it so much as it exemplifies what I enjoy about your writing.
2c) What separates it from other stories like it?
The imagery, I think.
3) What story of mine do you like the *least*?
The Utterly Perfect Murder
3a) Why?
Not exactly sure. I like the Lex portrayal but the story overall just didn't capture me.
3b) What separates it from the other stuff I wrote?
Maybe it's less visual. Less about the senses altogether.
3c) What separates it from other stories like it, if anything?
*shrug* Dunno really.
4) What about my writing style grabs you?
The imagery, the description. It's all very sensual.
4a) What stories exemplify this style?
And the Sailor, Apricot, the 2040 WIP (*pokes Jack* work on that last one would you *flutters eyelashes prettily* please?)
5) What type of story (not which characters) would you like to see me write?
Hm. Maybe longer stories. Or, hey, even more stories would be brilliant *g*
6) Is there a specific character or situation you'd like to see me try my hand at?
Some of the more minor characters. Pete. Maybe Chloe. And more Superman era Lex.
6a) Why do you think I'd be good at it?
Because you often have novel ideas and I'd like to see your thoughts on other characters.
7) Is there anything, in your experience, that you think would help me fix a specific flaw in my writing?
Nothing leaps to mind.