Oh, this is gorgeous, Jack! Gorgeous and sexy. I never even thought of Lionel doing it, but you make it right and dirty and provocative. You're in his head, and it feels right, just like him, the arrogance, the sly pleasure in doing something taboo, the thoughts that almost cover Lex and Martha. The end is surprisingly poignant; you've done the near-impossible and made Lionel human, a little lonely, although he'd never admit it, leaving his glass there like a flag. Beautiful and hot.
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Date: 2002-12-07 11:39 pm (UTC)