All right, I bow before majority rule and concede my arse is just strange. (Though in a good way.)
A short-stroked, tight, almost dry half-fuck can be very hot but it's not going to be some slow, gentle romantic thing. It's going to include a little pain, a little discomfort
Mmnngh. One little sentence just should not be that hot, damn all. I may just have to write such a scene now. Or you could. Or we both could. Or... here, Kitty, Kitty...
I hate the feeling that the writer is just reciting what they're read elsewhere
That was the other thing that bothered me about 98% of references to post-coital anorectal discomfort.
And my pet peeve is having one guy just ram it the root in the other guy's virgin bum.
It was pretty easy going for me my first time; he didn't ram it in, but he prolly could've. See my above comments re my weird arse.
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Date: 2002-07-20 10:32 pm (UTC)A short-stroked, tight, almost dry half-fuck can be very hot but it's not going to be some slow, gentle romantic thing. It's going to include a little pain, a little discomfort
Mmnngh. One little sentence just should not be that hot, damn all. I may just have to write such a scene now. Or you could. Or we both could. Or... here, Kitty, Kitty...
I hate the feeling that the writer is just reciting what they're read elsewhere
That was the other thing that bothered me about 98% of references to post-coital anorectal discomfort.
And my pet peeve is having one guy just ram it the root in the other guy's virgin bum.
It was pretty easy going for me my first time; he didn't ram it in, but he prolly could've. See my above comments re my weird arse.