I wanted to say how much I loved your story "Greenlit" - it's beautitful, it's brilliant, it's clever, it's sexy, and it's very nicely crafted. I particularly liked the way you described Lex's head as gracile, so perfect in its implications - and the whole thing beautifully romantic. My favourite line is probably Clark "watching the muscles of Lex's back shift under the designer pullover that was Lex's idea of dressed down."
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Date: 2002-11-14 08:02 pm (UTC)I wanted to say how much I loved your story "Greenlit" - it's beautitful, it's brilliant, it's clever, it's sexy, and it's very nicely crafted. I particularly liked the way you described Lex's head as gracile, so perfect in its implications - and the whole thing beautifully romantic. My favourite line is probably Clark "watching the muscles of Lex's back shift under the designer pullover that was Lex's idea of dressed down."
Thank you!
namaste,
Elizabeth