Fic: "Hapless Sons"
Aug. 12th, 2005 10:10 pmI'm trying to work on -- *wanting* to work on -- two of my WIPs. (This one and this one, for those of you playing the home game.) So of course I wrote another, unrelated story, in its entirety, this afternoon.
::facepalms::
I blame Te, for asking a question that led to this. And
jamjar for inspiring the question.
Contains content that may not be appropriate for all readers. Also contains giant woobie.
Hapless Sons
He knows it's late. He'd done a partial patrol in the City before (giving in and) driving (home) to Gotham. So, expecting to arrive at the Manor not long before dawn, he'd made the drive in civvies, his costume in a duffel slung over the back of the bike.
Now the bag is on the bed in (what used to be, once upon a time) his bedroom, and he's heading down the (*The*) stairs. Alfred keeps his old room as freshly-aired and dust-free as if Dick still lived here, only the lack of yearbooks from later than the year he'd graduated or any current music giving away that the room was now more a (monument, a) museum piece than anything. These stairs are much the same, for all that they *are* used daily; there's never bat guano on them, or even dust, despite all the stone that's been ground away down here over the years.
So it's easy for his descent to be soundless, even though Bruce usually -- somehow -- hears (or senses) him if he's already down in the Cave.
A laugh echoes up from below. Jason. Well, he can't pretend that's surprising. Back when he was Robin, he'd often be at work alongside Bruce till nearly dawn, too, even on school nights.
He rounds the last curve of the stairs, and stops, one foot hanging above the next step.
Bruce is in the big chair by the main computer. He's in the suit, the cowl pushed back, and Dick can see (can't not see) that the tights and trunks are pushed down, too, just enough to expose--
Jason is in (*on*) Bruce's lap. Bare legs spread, and Dick can tell the shorts are somewhere else, because he can see the pale curves of the kid's equally (obscenely) bare ass around the dark shadow of Bruce's still-gauntleted hand. His other hand is on Jason's shoulder; both of Jason's hands are clenched in Bruce's hair.
Bruce is pulling Jason into his lap (over and over) in time with flexes of his thighs that shift him almost off the chair's seat. Jason's legs are flexing, too, and his arms, his whole body, working with Bruce's movements -- not against them.
That's something. Dick doesn't know if it's better or worse, but it's something.
Jason's head shifts, or both of theirs do, and there's a faint wet *smack* like a kiss ending. It's Jason's jawline against Bruce's mouth now, and the kid laughs again, head tilted back, and pants, "oh, *yeah*, yeah." Bruce grunts, and even at this distance it's no sound Dick has ever heard him make (just imagined it, so many)--
He nearly falls when he tries to get both feet on solid ground, his body having forgotten it was on a staircase.
He doesn't (can't) look back down across the cave.
It's weirdly tempting (in a way he doesn't want to examine) to try to make noise as he goes back upstairs. And pointless, on top of impossible. Alfred does his job too well, Dick has been trained too well, they all have their roles (functions) in this life.
When he gets back to the study and closes the clock behind him, (he's surprised that) his hands are steady (and by how much he's sweating). The room is empty. (He's alone.)
He's alone.
On his way (to his room, not his room anymore) to pick up his duffel, he meets Alfred, coming in the opposite direction. Alfred (looks at him for just a moment -- but it's enough, and he doesn't know whether it's worse that Alfred knows that *he* knows now or that Alfred must have known already -- and) only asks, "Would you care for a light breakfast before your drive back, Master Dick?"
Getting the food down (even keeping it down) won't be a problem. It's just that he knows he won't (enjoy) taste any of it, and that would be a disservice to Alfred's cooking.
But it will make Alfred (think he's made Dick) feel better.
"Sure, Alfred," he says. "Thanks."
At least there will be nothing for either of them to explain while he eats.
end.
Title from taken from "Love Not" by Caroline Elizabeth Sarah Norton, courtesy of bartleby.com.
Thanks to Te and Mary for audiencing; and, to borrow a phrase from
cereta,
elynross made this better.
Happy early birthday, Jason.
other DC-comics-based writing by Jack
fanfiction by the Jack (all fandoms)
::facepalms::
I blame Te, for asking a question that led to this. And
Contains content that may not be appropriate for all readers. Also contains giant woobie.
Hapless Sons
He knows it's late. He'd done a partial patrol in the City before (giving in and) driving (home) to Gotham. So, expecting to arrive at the Manor not long before dawn, he'd made the drive in civvies, his costume in a duffel slung over the back of the bike.
Now the bag is on the bed in (what used to be, once upon a time) his bedroom, and he's heading down the (*The*) stairs. Alfred keeps his old room as freshly-aired and dust-free as if Dick still lived here, only the lack of yearbooks from later than the year he'd graduated or any current music giving away that the room was now more a (monument, a) museum piece than anything. These stairs are much the same, for all that they *are* used daily; there's never bat guano on them, or even dust, despite all the stone that's been ground away down here over the years.
So it's easy for his descent to be soundless, even though Bruce usually -- somehow -- hears (or senses) him if he's already down in the Cave.
A laugh echoes up from below. Jason. Well, he can't pretend that's surprising. Back when he was Robin, he'd often be at work alongside Bruce till nearly dawn, too, even on school nights.
He rounds the last curve of the stairs, and stops, one foot hanging above the next step.
Bruce is in the big chair by the main computer. He's in the suit, the cowl pushed back, and Dick can see (can't not see) that the tights and trunks are pushed down, too, just enough to expose--
Jason is in (*on*) Bruce's lap. Bare legs spread, and Dick can tell the shorts are somewhere else, because he can see the pale curves of the kid's equally (obscenely) bare ass around the dark shadow of Bruce's still-gauntleted hand. His other hand is on Jason's shoulder; both of Jason's hands are clenched in Bruce's hair.
Bruce is pulling Jason into his lap (over and over) in time with flexes of his thighs that shift him almost off the chair's seat. Jason's legs are flexing, too, and his arms, his whole body, working with Bruce's movements -- not against them.
That's something. Dick doesn't know if it's better or worse, but it's something.
Jason's head shifts, or both of theirs do, and there's a faint wet *smack* like a kiss ending. It's Jason's jawline against Bruce's mouth now, and the kid laughs again, head tilted back, and pants, "oh, *yeah*, yeah." Bruce grunts, and even at this distance it's no sound Dick has ever heard him make (just imagined it, so many)--
He nearly falls when he tries to get both feet on solid ground, his body having forgotten it was on a staircase.
He doesn't (can't) look back down across the cave.
It's weirdly tempting (in a way he doesn't want to examine) to try to make noise as he goes back upstairs. And pointless, on top of impossible. Alfred does his job too well, Dick has been trained too well, they all have their roles (functions) in this life.
When he gets back to the study and closes the clock behind him, (he's surprised that) his hands are steady (and by how much he's sweating). The room is empty. (He's alone.)
He's alone.
On his way (to his room, not his room anymore) to pick up his duffel, he meets Alfred, coming in the opposite direction. Alfred (looks at him for just a moment -- but it's enough, and he doesn't know whether it's worse that Alfred knows that *he* knows now or that Alfred must have known already -- and) only asks, "Would you care for a light breakfast before your drive back, Master Dick?"
Getting the food down (even keeping it down) won't be a problem. It's just that he knows he won't (enjoy) taste any of it, and that would be a disservice to Alfred's cooking.
But it will make Alfred (think he's made Dick) feel better.
"Sure, Alfred," he says. "Thanks."
At least there will be nothing for either of them to explain while he eats.
end.
Title from taken from "Love Not" by Caroline Elizabeth Sarah Norton, courtesy of bartleby.com.
Thanks to Te and Mary for audiencing; and, to borrow a phrase from
Happy early birthday, Jason.
other DC-comics-based writing by Jack
fanfiction by the Jack (all fandoms)
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Date: 2005-08-13 02:54 am (UTC)Well, okay, it's probably more unkind to Bruce to have made him do this under mind control than voluntarily. But DICK!!! Poor woobie!!!!
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Date: 2005-08-13 08:40 pm (UTC)inappropriatesexual way.And I would have tried to write it that way, only... that wasn't the story my Dick-muse had to tell me, I guess. It would be funny for Dick to be trying to rescue them. Only, in the end, it wouldn't be any funnier than this turned out.
An actual supervillain using mind control to make Batman and Robin go at it (hey, it's no crazier than a lot of actual Golden- and Silver-Age crack) would be cruel, but also redundant, at least when it comes to Bruce and Jason...
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Date: 2005-08-13 03:05 am (UTC)Diiiiiiick! Run away and let Roy shag you better...
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Date: 2005-08-13 08:45 pm (UTC)That was exactly the effect I was aiming for, so I'm pleased to hear it worked for you.
::sends Roy to tackle Dick for the boy's own good::
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Date: 2005-08-13 08:54 pm (UTC)Wonder where he learned that from. q:
He needs to run off and find a Timmy to make it all better.
This is set long before Dick and Tim met for the second time. But then again... if Tim is watching, and he sees how brokem-hearted Dick is when he leaves the Manor again... maybe...
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Date: 2005-08-13 11:05 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2005-08-13 05:32 am (UTC)BTW don't feel bad about taking a break from your WIPs as long we readers get such other cool stories out of it. ;)
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Date: 2005-08-13 09:02 pm (UTC)BTW don't feel bad about taking a break from your WIPs as long we readers get such other cool stories out of it.
Aw, thanks. It's just... I feel a sense of *duty* to continue the work I've started on the other stories. But then sometimes a new story will be *right there*, ready and willing, and it's so easy to just go for it...
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Date: 2005-08-13 06:04 am (UTC):Is sad:
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Date: 2005-08-13 09:04 pm (UTC)Come on out, little lurker. LJ accounts are free, and so easy to use...
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Date: 2005-08-13 08:36 am (UTC)GOOD job, Jack.
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Date: 2005-08-13 09:08 pm (UTC)Look at the BOOBIES until you feel better.
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Date: 2005-08-13 09:51 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-08-13 09:23 pm (UTC)PS I love your Lila icon. ::stares:: GUH.
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Date: 2005-08-13 09:58 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-08-13 01:47 pm (UTC)I really liked what you did with the brackets. I had to reread them all to see if they all worked. This was very good.
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Date: 2005-08-15 05:00 am (UTC)I am glad -- a little -- that Dick is hurt enough to leave, here, rather than kick up a fuss. Neither solution would actually solve anything, after all.
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Date: 2005-12-17 01:24 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-08-16 08:32 am (UTC)And as if that weren't enough, you then used such a distinctive style-- I have to fourth or fifth the praise for your use of brackets. Overall, this was a completely wonderful, believable piece. Thank you for posting it!
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Date: 2005-12-17 01:25 pm (UTC)And clearly the parentheticals are a winning strategy for Dickangst.
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Date: 2005-08-19 05:25 pm (UTC)But it will make Alfred (think he's made Dick) feel better.
Another round of applause on the parenthetical (not really) asides. They worked really well for me -- they translated into a low mutter at the back of my head, underlying what was around them. They start out so reflective, and then really underline Dick's shock in the Cave.
And. Oh gods. Alfred. Being all silently-understanding and -- ack. Definitely ack. ::whimpers::
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Date: 2005-12-17 01:28 pm (UTC)Glad I could make you whimper...
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Date: 2005-12-30 05:13 pm (UTC)What works in this is that everything is so tactile, and tactile precisely because of the lack of melodrama that simultaneously mutes and magnifies everything Dick's feeling. (Am I making sense? No.) The basic physical details (where Bruce's hands are, where Jason's mouth is) and the tilted perspective (looking into the Cave) have a strange sort of snowball effect, like a gallery of too-bright, sordid photographs -- culminating in a feeling of outsider-ness that is completely overwhelming, completely... Oh, Dick. Never what Bruce needed. Wanted --
The stairs, and Alfred's meal. I don't know why that bit affected me so much. Just. The familiarity of it, as well as the shock that's pervading Dick's system at the time. It's that sort of sensible, understated reaction to a horrid situation that people tend to have, even though stories tend to make bad experiences far more dramatic.
It's just...
Life tends to land silent punches, sometimes. You get that. This story gets that.
Thank you.
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